Showing posts with label Deviations. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Deviations. Show all posts

Wednesday, January 4, 2017

Sneak Peek!

Finally done with the first eight chapters of my new novel, DEVIATIONS. Here's a sneak peek from the end of chapter eight. 
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I spin and give the orderly my fiercest glare. “You want me to trust an orderly?”
“I’m not an orderly,” he says, his eyes darting down the street where the shouts are getting louder. “My name is Amos. I’m part of a rebel group, and I’ve been planted in the hall for the past seven months. We’ve been working on a way to get you out ever since your trial.”
I search his face, looking for lies hidden in his expression. “What?”
“Do you really think you’re the type to lead a rebellion?” he asks.
            I shake my head emphatically. “No.”
            “Then let’s prove them wrong.”
            “How?”
            “Get your list. Prove it’s not you.”
Dimwitted idiot. “They can’t find my list!” I hiss.
He exhales sharply. “Lists are kept at the Reserve. In the Archives. You were right; everyone has a list. Yours must still be there.”
“So?”
“So get it. Bring it back here. And prove that you’re not the one they’re looking for. “
I stare at him like he’s lost his mind. Because surely he has. It’s somewhere with my list, in the realm of the unobtainable.
Amos glances down the street. “Look, the only thing that’s going to save your life and those you care about is to prove to the Order you’re not the leader of a future rebellion. The only way to do that is to find your list.”
            “I am the most wanted person in all of Alladia!" I whisper. "What are the chances this will work?”
“What are your chances if you stay here?” he counters.
The truth smacks around inside my head. I see it there: the judge’s stern gaze. The Order’s look of approval at my sentence. The tattoos on the Executioner’s body. I either become an outlaw trying to prove my innocence or stay here and agree with their sentence of guilt.
Shouts echo off the stone wall. I stare up at Amos. “Why do you want to help me?”
His eyes soften. “Because I don’t think you are who they say they are.”
“They’ll kill you, too. Why risk it?”
“Sometimes doing the right thing is worth the risk.”
My eyes bore into his as I try to figure out if he’s honest or the biggest fraud in the world.
            Amos snatches my hand in his and tugs me around the corner just as torch lights spill onto the street we’d been standing on. I race after him, my heart pounding a furious rhythm in my head that I am either the luckiest girl alive or the stupidest person to ever breathe air. We dash down a tangle of streets, Amos pulling me farther and farther away from my iron prison. When we come to the city wall, he squats down and quickly tosses away a pile of garbage, revealing an opening just wide enough for me to shimmy through. He joins me on the other side, his face dim in the moonlight, then he moves in front of me.
I grab his arm. “Where are we going?”
He throws a smirk over his shoulder. “To freedom, Lennan Eastley.”
Fear mingles with hope inside my chest. I have no time to question him farther as he grabs my hand again. And without another word, I let this red haired vagrant lead me away into the night.



Thursday, November 17, 2016

Something new

Hello fair friends and readers! I've finally got my brain back (praise Jesus for babies who figure out they can sleep on their stomach and snooze so much better at night!). My new fantasy story is well under way. It's been in my head for ages, and gosh, I'm dying to get it out of my brain and onto paper for crying out loud.

The outline is done (and I never do outlines before I write), and after weeks of struggling, I finally got the 2nd chapter under wraps. This story is definitely going slower than my others have.(babies disrupt ease of writing novels, that's for sure - specially when you still have a part time job). It'll be a while before it's written, but I wanted to give you all a little taste of what it's about.

The title: DEVIATIONS

I came up with the idea one day reading Colossians 2:13-15
"And you, who were dead in you trespasses...God made alive together with him, having forgiven us all our trespasses, by cancelling the record of debt that stood against us with its legal demands."

I started thinking about those words; about a list of all our sins existing with its demands for punishment. And as I was mulling that over, I thought: What if there was a world where there was a literal list of your sins? And you had to stand trial for them?

And thus, the book was born.

The story is based on themes like these:



My main character is Lennan. 


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17.
Smart.
Loyal.
Dabbles in trading things.
Really good at reading people.
Can't seem to stop lying.
Fiercely protective of her baby brother.


Another main character is Blythe.


17.
Anything but gentle.
Impulsive.
Brash.
Brutally honest (and thrives on it)
Pent on vengeance

Then there's Amos:

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19.
Passionate.
Zealous.
May be hiding a thing. Or two. Or ten.
Annoys the crap out of Lennan.

Then there's Griffin:

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19.
Riddled with tattoos of those he's hurt.
Gentle soul.
Makes a living by hurting people, oddly enough.

I love this story (even though it's not written yet). It has lots of things.
Prophets.
Magic.
A city where the laws are engraved in the walls.
Visions.
Enslaved people.
Romance.
Broken characters.
The hope of redemption for each of them.

If this book were published, and you were to pick it up, here's what it would say on the back:

Before Lennan Eastley was born, her trial date was set. Everyone gets one in their seventeenth year. Lennan’s is set for two weeks after her birthday. Her Deviation List will be read. From the biggest offense, to the smallest thing - everything she will ever do wrong is on that list. Her trial will determine her punishment.

But when Lennan gets to trial, her deviation list is missing. Now her government is accusing her of treason, and wants to try her for leading a rebellion in a future she hasn’t lived yet. Lennan knows there’s no way she can be who they say; she’d never compromise her life and those she loves to betray her government. But without her list, proving her innocence is impossible.

Determined to find the truth, Lennan begins making choices she never thought she’d make and doing things she always swore she’d never do. Maybe her government is right. Maybe she really will lead a rebellion and murder thousands. Now Lennan doesn’t know what’s true. About her country. About herself.


She’s going to be guilty of something. She just doesn’t know what yet. 

Stay tuned for more!