Showing posts with label Characters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Characters. Show all posts

Thursday, April 24, 2014

Meet my hunky love interest

So, it's interesting to me that when I first started writing my book, there was no love interest. None. Zip. It was just a story about a girl, and her father, and her past.

Somehow, M slipped in. I have no idea how he popped into my head. But one day there he was. And oh my, he would not leave. Sigh...such an M thing to do. He's crazy persistent.

M works for A (R's dad). So yes, he is a trained killer. Rugged. Navy Seals-esque. (Are you swooning yet?)  M's love for order and discipline is rivaled only by his loyalty to his King and Captain and fellow men in his company.  He thinks ridding the world of evil means keeping law breakers and assassins at bay, and he is trained to do just that.  Such a straight laced, play by the rules guy.

I always pictured him dark haired in my mind. This maybe:

Hunky, yes?



Or this, but with green eyes.

Little bit Robin Hood

M prides himself on being able to anticipate things and adjust at a moment’s notice so that he can protect what he has to.  His friendship with his captain’s handful of a daughter is proving to be something M can’t figure out or prevent from tilting his world on end.    His type A-ness does not know what to do with her.


Why yes he will
M doesn't understand just how much the horrors of R’s past affect her, and as his relationship with his captain’s feisty daughter deepens, M has a hard time figuring out where his loyalties lie and what he’s really fighting against.  

Tough, duty-bound boy will go against everything he's loyal to for her. 

Love


His falling for her is beautiful. I've read it a bazillion times, and it still makes me swoon. Sigh...


Friday, April 18, 2014

Meet my second MC

So, I'm introducing the characters in my book.  Last time, I introduced my main character, R.  Today, we move on to the men.

Meet A.

A is R's adopted Dad (remember he was married to her mom, but then when she left he went searching for her and found her illegitimate child instead).

A works for the King in a bodyguard/soldier/trained assassin type of way.  Think Navy Seals meets Secret Service meets Jack Bauer. A is a total bad@#* -forgive the crassness but really, that's the best way to describe him.

At first I pictured him like this:

Not quite rugged enough-
Not quite right, so I moved to this:

Ah, the beard makes it better
But then....I saw the movie Captain Phillips (which is a great movie by the way) and as soon as it showed the head Navy Seals guy, oh man-

Guy's real name is Max Martini
Yes.

Yes, yes, yes-this is A.  As soon as I saw him in the movie, that is the thought that clanged loudly in my head.  You really get a feel when you watch the movie because the Navy Seals thing really adds to it.  And A is the captain of the Navy Seals-esque group of soldiers in my book. So this guy is a perfect representation for him.

A is hardened.  Bitter and mad as all get out when his wife left him.  Then overnight he became the father to a broken, bold, half starved 13 year old girl.  The man is trained and capable in so many ways, but sweet mercy, not for that.

Ah, but he rose to the challenge.  A is fierce and unyielding with his men, but gentle as can be with his daughter.  He can kill with his bare hands, but holds her tenderly when she wakes screaming from nightmares.
This is his anthem over his daughter

Protective? Overly.
Intolerant to disobedience? You better believe it.
Was he blessed with a mild daughter who always does as she's told?  Of course not.

But his love for her is just, ah, so unwavering and sweet.  Think this:

See that face? That's him with her.

Don't worry, he is not perfect.  A has fears that lurk under his skin too.  He struggles with rejection and feeling inadequate (darn that woman who left him!)  His fears end up being the weapon that drives a wedge between he and R.

He'd die to save her, but he can't save her from things that have already happened.  Powerlessness is a hard thing for him to bear.  And bear it he will have to.




Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Meet my main character

I have completed line edits on my book (woot! woot!)  It's getting closer to being ready to pitch to agents, which is both wildly exciting and absolutely terrifying. 

I don't want to divulge details of my book, mostly because the world wide web is ripe for plucking someone else's ideas and I don't want mine stolen.  So, I'll hoard the details and keep them to myself. But some people have asked what it's about so I thought I would share a little.

Book One is a Young Adult book set in fictional medieval times. (I made up the places instead of using real ones, because that's more fun).  It's told from three points of view.  R, my lead.  Her father, A.  And M, the love interest (insert swooning here).  Ironically enough, when I first started the story M did not exist, and it was just a story about a girl and her father.  Then M showed up out of nowhere and oh my, he's very persistent, and I could not get him to leave.  He's wildly loyal and determined like that.  

I made a Pinterest board when I first started writing this story because I needed to visualize it.  I've found it's helpful to get a strong sense of who my characters are as people. Here are a few things I pinned that helped me visualize R. 

R

Yeah, she's blond.  That she looks like me wasn't intentional.  I first had her dad's image in mind (and he looked like Keifer Sutherland) and at first she was his biological daughter, so she had blond hair.  She's tall which is intentional because Mary mother of Jesus, I cannot stand it that all female leads are tiny.  As if the only girl who can save the world and be worth loving is a tiny scrape of a thing.  Hogwash.  I've been 5'9" since I was 14 and hated that in so many books and movies it's the little girl who is the one who gets rescued.  I understand that by being small it makes what some female leads accomplish seem that much more impressive, but glory, for the sake of anyone who is a normal height and size, I cannot stand it. R is tall and not tiny.  And people still fight for her.  So there you go Hollywood.  (rant over)

Story of her life

R is a wounded character, both literally and figuratively. She's lived a pretty horrible childhood and now lives with the man she calls Father.  He's not her real dad.  He was married to R's mom, but when she left he went searching for his wife, and found his wife's illegitimate daughter instead.  She loves her father to pieces.  The two of them first bonded over the same woman abandoning them, and now are impossibly close.  He is the only person she trusts and the only person she cries in front of.  She'd rather die than lose his love.

Hair in a braid. Yes.

R loves reading dark and scary stories (how ironic) and going for rides on her horse.  She cannot stand seeing someone get hurt, and is so stinkin' honest and genuine you either love her or hate her. 

R is feisty, but damaged.  Fear lurks underneath her skin and she can't shake it.  

Stubborn as a mule she is, but utterly delightful

R is fierce, but not a warrior.   I didn't want a Tris or a Katniss.  While those characters are great, they are not everyone.  Not all of us will save our faction or district.  We don't all use literal weapons to save those we love.  But we all are wounded.  And we all battle names that were spoken over us and get to decide if they are true or not.  That's R.  

fear is her story
R has to face some pretty big fears throughout her story.  And for some of them, she can't borrow her father's courage to face.  She's up against them alone.  

I love her to pieces.  I love when she went from  being an idea in my head to a person on a piece of paper.  I loved it even more when she started taking on a life of her own.  Sometimes while writing she would say or do something and I would stop typing mid-sentence and think "where the heck did that come from?"  

I'm so proud of R and the person she becomes at the end of Book One.  Even more proud of her in Book Two, and by Book Three, glory-she's someone I aspire to be.  

Stubborn, fiery, sweet, wounded girl that she is; I absolutely adore her.

Stay tuned for more tidbits of my other characters!